by Mrs. Carlene Anderson & 3rd Grade Students (2011-2014), School #12 - Paterson, New Jersey USA

Friday, November 4, 2011

The Spoken Word-Peace Poem-Michelle

Peace is like a pink butterfly. Peace looks like candy. It sounds nice and makes me feel colorful. Peace is never bad or evil but is always amazing.

3 comments:

  1. Michelle, the amazing feeling that peaceful recollections bring are like butterfly kisses on my cheeks. How sweet!

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  2. Michelle, we listened to your poem today in class 1A in Denmark. We had it translated into Danish. You are really good at writing poems!
    From 1A, Vonsild School, Denmark

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  3. Michelle you did a great job! You used a lot of discriptive words!
    Your friend,
    Sandra Navarro

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